Gerald Graff argues in his article,
Hidden Intellectualism, that people in today’s world are better off with
street smarts than book smarts because people with street smarts are interested
in what is going on in their communities and in the nation rather than just
studying on an academic level. Gerald’s thesis states, “…that street smarts
beat out book smarts in our culture not because street smarts are
nonintellectual, as we generally suppose, but because they satisfy an
intellectual thirst more thoroughly than school culture, which seems pale and
unreal.” Gerald stresses the idea that there is a hidden intellect in all of us
whether it is in school or in our community. Unfortunately, schools do not care about
street smarts but only about how smart you are academically. He argues that
students would be better writers if they were allowed to write about
nonacademic topics that they were interested in.
Gerald Graff supports his argument
well by talking about his personal experiences. He tells readers’ that growing
up he hated reading books but enjoyed reading sports articles. He then realized
that when he was reading sports books and magazines and talking to his friends
about sports that he was being an intellectual. He was making arguments, weighing
different kinds of evidence, moving between particulars and generalizations,
summarizing the views of other, and entering a conversation about ideas. He was
able to do this easily because he was interested in what he was discussing. If
teachers gave more leeway to what students were allowed to write about then
they would become better writers.
I agree with Graff’s argument because
we all have hidden talents whether they are academic or outside of school.
These talents can open our world to many new experiences that may not involve
academics at all. People that have stronger street smarts should be given a
chance to get into good schools and programs because in today’s world it can be
better to have street smarts than book smarts. I also agree that it is easier
to write about a topic you are passionate about than a topic that is
uninteresting. When I write about something I am interested in I don’t feel as
though writing is a task. It becomes something I enjoy doing rather than
something that is unexciting to me. I like the fact that in this writing class,
we are all given an opportunity to write about personal experiences and topics
that we find fascinating.
I completely agree with your post. I identified the same thesis statement and I agree that his main point is that school must be made interesting in order to have students feel involved and motivated in learning. I thought this article was great because its so true! Students, like ourselves, are many times forced to learn about things we don't necessarily care or are interested about. This post is very well written and you responded to the article very accurately.
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